I added my hello to the card. I think I like it, but I am not sure. The Hello may be to "playful"

I made these cards to celebrate the fourth of July. I used night of navy, real red, and Shimmery white for paper. I used Night of navy and real red for ink. The ribbon is night of navy. The letters are brushstroke alphabet. The star is love it.
I think the second one is going to say hello eventually.